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This worked out quite nicely, even if the process took 7 or so hours!

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~VampiressAleera Nov 11, 2007, 4:24:43 AM
nice work =]

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WOOOO! Bowie in a google pie!"

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~angelasami Nov 11, 2007, 8:30:49 PM
thanx...

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~oOfAlLeN-aNgEl Nov 12, 2007, 2:25:46 AM
GAH. SCREWED UP HTML CODEY THING. HIDE TIS DAMN COMMENT! i is gunna post a new one.

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~oOfAlLeN-aNgEl Nov 12, 2007, 2:26:35 AM
Yay~ you submitted it!

Meh, seeing as "Advanced Critique" is encouraged and according to you, I'm "advanced, I will uh... be 'critical' ;;

So.
1. The body's a bit too stiff
2. You need to study anatomy; the body's not proportioned correctly
3. The eyes... Nice but a bit too big. I mean, big eyes a good if you have TONS of detail... But if not, make 'em a bit smaller. ^^;;
Hmm... Hmm... I'm having fun here though i am so NOT pro.

anyways...

4. The colours... A bit more variation. At least 3 DIFFERENT colours. >.> Yeah... 60% of one, 30% percent of another and 10% percent for the last one. Make the colours compliment each other!

and yes... I'm almost done.

5. Make the hair look somewhat more natural.

That is all.

Goodbye. ^^

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~angelasami Nov 12, 2007, 12:47:48 PM
lol

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~angelasami Nov 12, 2007, 12:48:38 PM
oks i'll have a looksie at what needs attention:D
c u @ skool...
KILL ME!!! MATHS EXAM!!!!

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~oOfAlLeN-aNgEl Nov 12, 2007, 2:39:13 PM
NAH NAH~ i ish siick.

i'll have to do a make-up exam on friiday... T^T i'd much rather get it over and done with...

but then again, i haven't studied. >.>

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~angelasami Nov 13, 2007, 8:27:36 PM
YAY!!! how did u find it in last period??? do u reckon u passed?

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